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EDITED: 4/16/09

Cartsssssssss

I needed to do a new reference for my fursona because the old one was crap lol

I changed a few things...I tried to make her look more like a wolf-husky which is what she is....i changed her tail there...and I took out her bangs...they looked kind of weird being on there dsfsdf

ummm thats it :iconlarryplz:

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:iconunfulfilled:
I personally think the legs are a bit too far apart ;o
the left shoulder kinda makes me feel weird , but it's probably because the hair is covering it , it looks a bit lopsided
nonetheless , i hope this may help ._.

overall though , i find this lovely .
you're way better than me in human :]
gah it's cute ^__^ nice shoes , too .

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:iconmerylle:
aww Carts, you have a GORGEOUS human style! it's very pretty, and unique, too! I love how you drew her hair too! Its so pretty~ ;_;<3 And the clothes-- the jacket is beautiful~
I agree with unfulfilled though, the legs do sem a bit fart apart.

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:icontamaku:
BECAUSE I SUCK AT EXPLAINING
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Basically, the shoulders looked un-even, but thatmight have been from the jacket, wth do i know. ANNND make sure she has ears :1 very subtle detail, but it looked kinda funny.
The hand looked REALLY weird. I usually use my own hand for reference, but you should be able to see all the fingers if the hand is like that. And i don't think hands could originally bend that way. Tried to do it myself,, but my hand doesn't pop out that way :c
The pants looked really uneven. One side was really long, the other was short. I (tried) to make them the same length. I dunno if I actually changed anything when I redrew the foot :1 Dunno why i redrew it anyway.
Also, I don't know kif you actually wear pants that low. I erased teh belt line and put the bottom pocket marks in, because as far as i know, pants don't go THAT low unless you want your ass hanging out.
Aaaand ignore the hair thing :1 Accidently drew that.
Also, I wouldn't..put sparkles in the hair. it looks like dandruff to me a little jdskl
OK I'M DONE
yea.
i feel like i should put some nice things about it now but...i can't really say anything else merylle and unfullfilled haven't
:icontamaku:
MY TYPOS SUCK :C IGNORE THEM.
:iconkhalivea:
WHAT ARE YOU SAYING YOURE HUMANS ARE GREAT AND YOUR JUST STARTING OUTTT ngg
im in the same boat as you pretty much, i've just put off drawing humans for ages but i really really want to learn to draw them properly! i've started the other month to look at them more seriously ha

but anyway
my photoshop broke so i redlined in oekaki but im really terrible at sketching in oekaki so you'll have to excuse me! [link]

i tried to explain everything there but i couldnt with cartsdogs dsjkgf basically wolves and siberian huskies both have quite strong builds and a different leg shape, here see: [link] + a skinny wolf [link] just to show they have big bones so even if theyre skinny they still have a big build?
i love how you made her legs all long and wolfy though haha
so right KEEP AT IT with your humans theres not anything thats too outstandingly off you know? like if you didnt ask for crits i wouldnt really see anything wrong cos i wouldnt be looking IFTHATMAKESSENSE
dont be appalled !
also youre skinny and tall like me yay letsbemodels!

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:iconcrusiatthedisco:
I agree with :devTamuku: on the shoulders. and the ear thing but, tbh when i draw human's I don't draw dem. xD


but I think the legs look fine my dear Carts n____n<3

ONTO the ~quad~.

OMGSH IMPROVEMENT 8DD <33

I love how your anatomy looks, just so clean and smooth ;___;
That face, your faces are really improving too! 8D

<33 eeeeeeek. I love your art hahaha. <3

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I can't draw humans, so I won't even attempt any critique on that. 'Sides, it's much better than I could ever do anyways.

You've improved SO MUCH on your quads. <33 Your entire anatomy and structure looks better and the facessss! (:

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:icongreyhoundtimmy:
Hmm carts i dont have much to say but from my point of view you did very awesome even on you're human ref it almost suprised me I must say cause I suck at drawing people!! XD

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hmm yeah the shoulder sdfsdf that was bugging me too; i'll pay more attention to shoulders next time :thumbsup:

Thank you! :D

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:iconfriendshipcircle:
Thank you Mer! :glomp:

okay, i'll keep that in mind for next time haha xDD

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